Picture Book Critiques

As time allows, I am able to offer critiques of non-rhyming picture books up to 700 words. I am the best fit for humorous picture books, stories with puns and wordplay, lyrical books, and tales that mix humor and heart. I am not a good fit for nonfiction or STEM picture books (I do not have personal experience writing these types of stories and am not as familiar with the market).

If you are interested in working with me, you can check out rates and testimonials below, then use my contact form with the subject line “Critiques” to reach out.


Services & Rates

Big Picture Critique ($75): I’ll provide big-picture feedback on your manuscript, which includes notes about pacing, plot, and character development. The critique will highlight manuscript strengths and suggested areas to work on.

Full Manuscript Critique ($100): In addition to providing big-picture feedback, I’ll also make line-level comments to strengthen your manuscript.

Revision Critique ($50): If we’ve worked together on a manuscript, I’ll provide a full critique of your revision.


Have more questions? Not seeing what you’re looking for?

Reach out via my contact form. I may be able to create a custom package that suits your needs.

“As one of Laura’s critique partners, I’ve been lucky enough to get her feedback on several of my manuscripts. I can tell you without a doubt she has made each one stronger. Laura has a solid understanding of the craft of writing and it shows through her thorough and insightful critiques.” –Becky Scharnhorst, author of several picture books including How to Get Your Octopus to School

“I cannot recommend Laura’s critique services enough! Her big picture feedback resulted in my manuscript having more depth, and her line-by-line comments were both insightful and practical. I now have a story that I’m very proud of!” –Jenn Moudahi, critique client

“Laura has been one of my trusted critique partners for years. I can always count on her for honest, insightful feedback that will get my revision wheels turning.” –Katie Frawley, author of several picture books including Lighthouse and the Little Boat

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